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Thursday, December 13, 2007

Friends and Teens

First of all friendship means, a friendly relation or intimacy. It means loyal, peace, respect,compassion, honesty, trust, fun, and love. Teenagers are the middle part of your younger life. The ages are from 13 to 19. When you get older and start become an adult you will be given alot of choices to take and sometimes they will be hard, but on the other hand there are alot of great things when your a teen. You start growing taller (maybe) if your short, you will love life and you will love how you've grown. Friends are another thing when you get older. You will loose them, and you will make new ones.
Even sometimes, I loose a friend everyday because, either you will have fights and you'll hear rumors and jokes about yourself, and you will ask someone who told her that and it turns out your best friend did it. Friends are not supposed to hurt you or be mean to you, unless that person is absolutely just plain, mean! Then you shouldn't be there friend.
"A friend is someone who is there for you when he'd rather be anywhere else."
- Len Wein - Sent by Paulo Louro This is a quote that says alot. It means if your freind wants to be with you, that means he or she doesn't want to be any where else than to be with you because, your a really great friend no matter who you are. So if anyone brings you down, go to a friend, they will cheer you up as quick as you can say mashed potatoes! =]
Friendship is the kind of lovethat never can grow old.Warm and cozy it will staywhen other things are cold.Friendship is a love so trueit won't be denied,Because a friend will always bethere close by your side.Boyfriends and lovers come and goin this game of life we play,But a true friend, no matter what,in your heart will always stay.So hold these friends dear to you,and never let them go.Think how much they mean to you,and make sure to tell them so. Thats basically what i think about friends and teenagers.
-K.Byard

1 comments:

Jennifer said...

Good post, Katie. Friendships are hard to establish. Think about, too, what kind of friend you are.

You have A LOT of mechanical errors. By now, you should know that A LOT is TWO WORDS. Also, you're using "your" for "you're." Also, you're using "loose" (meaning "not tight") for lose (present tense of "lost"). Last, don't use second person (you or your or you're) when writing. If you are talking about yourself, you should be using "I, me, we, us." You also have run-on sentences, so watch your punctuation. Always capitalize the pronoun "I", and you should know the difference between "there" and "their."
I look forward to reading more and seeing sharper writing skills.